Essay Structure-Sir......

Hey Sir,
Could you possibly check out this essay/paragraph structure and tell me if its ok?

1)Intro.
2)History of Vergina tombs
-Philip II
-how many are there?
3)Archaeological discovery
-Andronikos
4)What the painting shows,how it explains myth and what does it mean
-sig.of Persephone
-shows nature and season story
5)Significance in the Vergina tomb
-death of nature
-death of Philip II
-major collapse
-why does it have its own tomb?
6)Technique of the painting and by who
-fresco style
-painter
-colours
-paint application
-composition
-size
-3D look
-naturalistic and realistic;evoked emotion
7)How it fits into art history
-new era of art
-Hellenistic freedom,human movement and nature
-painting rather than sculpture
8)Reconstruction
-robbery
-hole in it
-repainted and replastered
9)Tourist site and preservation
-in a museum site
-kept from public and closed off
10)Conclu.

I have also been researching for about 1 and 1/2 hrs on the technique of the actual painting in the tomb.